I know you have been through these points in class but here is a record of the areas you will need to focus on in order to improve in both the Language and Literature exams:
LITERATURE
FEEDBACK
- You must explain and analyse techniques used and effects achieved by writers NOT simply summarise effects or narrative
- Some sense of personal engagement and enjoyment required
- Need to make points, points, points
- Quoted evidence is 100% essential
- Need to be careful with spellings throughout and handwriting
- Some close reference to language required within each essay
- Keep answering (and using words of ) question
- Use words of question to start your response
- Need to make links between passage in extract question and rest of text
- Best to start extract question by placing extract in context
LANGUAGE
FEEDBACK
Question 1- Transformation task
· Must stick to given form ie. A report NOT a letter.
· Must use their own words as much as possible in the report.
· Answer specifics of question. In this case a report to recommend or not recommend. Do not just give a general report.
· Need to make more points of recommendation, in this case.
· Use as broad a range of points from the passage as possible.
· Initial reading of passage must incorporate the writer's point of view.
Question 2 – Effects of writer's Language
· Definite need to explain actual effect of identified choices. Not enough to simply identify words.
· Don't give a vague answer about the “writer painting an effective picture which draws us in etc etc”. Do mention similes, metaphors etc if relevent.
· Don't be too technical.
· Need to write more than half a side.
· Don't summarise what the writer has said. Comment on it and its effect.
Question 3 – Summary
· Don't copy actual words and phrases.
· Don't quote.
· Don't write in note form.
· Don't evaluate the success or otherwise or provide subjective comment on a passage.
· Make a minimum of 15 points.
· Use words of the question to start your summary.